Tuesday, June 1, 2010

Break My Heart Comments

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If you break my heart
youll stain the sky red
not in hate or in rage
but in the love that i have
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Ben Coomer
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Crazy Vampire 03 June 2010

i love this poem...it is simply amazing! u r a very talented writer...keep it up! =]

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Elias Barcelona 02 June 2010

wow thats great it paints a beautiful visual and has a great closing.

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