Saturday, July 8, 2006

Break It All Away Comments

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why you always suffocate in these walls,
which trample your good feelings and thoughts,
and then make your tears come out and fal,
and you feel no one listens to your wails and calls,
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Abdul Basit
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Mary Nagy 16 July 2006

I think you could have a real future in writing inspirational pieces that really motivate others (especially young people your age) to find a better place in life. Very nice. Sincerely, Mary

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