Break Free... /3 Comments

break free every teenager wants to break free.. a spectrum of emotions reflected in these lines

most of the time when people look at us they see these happy smiling faces that we wear, hiding behind them all our heartrending emotions... but i like the way you out profiled yourself in this poem...., .coz sometimes thats what poetry is about, to interpret some pages of life that other people find hard to fathom.....nice poem... i really was engrossed throughout.

Fantastic idea... just like a detective novel where we find the clue at the end. Dramatisation of a lyrical poem. Passionate and self-searching....Inside a person can die.... Only one question: Why are the poets of adolescent period or teenage look so gloomy in their poems? Depression?

you displayed a trapped girl wanted to be free perfectly i think....the lies...the reflection...just perfect...i can relate..keep writing^^

amazing u seem to have let your heart control your hand, and painted ur true emotions in words, very well done

I don't agree with Casey Geiger, I think this is a pretty good poem. Again, such emotion, I feel the pain. I know how it feels. I like the way you chose to express this.