Thursday, July 9, 2009

Break Free Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw one bird like me
Living on a dead tree
Waiting for long to see
Pouring shower of glee
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Indira Renganathan 31 January 2010

I smiled and said, its we.....everyone else along with you....nice thought well penned

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Walterrean Salley 24 December 2009

There's nothing like freedom

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Dev Poet 09 November 2009

I like your style of writing

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Antonio Liao 23 July 2009

cheer as the poem push my heart to reach the echelon of the highest point of desire.....a wish come in a simple template and sound of the soul shout for joy...a lovely poem of today...a 10 +

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premji premji 20 July 2009

freedom.......what a precious and painful word...........

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very nice.. of course you made it rhyme well.

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Saadat Tahir 15 July 2009

to me it sounded like the eagle-song of the CREE indian-american people very very nice i recommend u do an unrelated but beautiful piece on utube vanishing bread-instrumental i'd send u the link but PH parses the links on paste also do.....elcondor pasa...andean flute or if u can get then by... Paul Mauriat cheers

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Shashendra Amalshan 10 July 2009

very musical indeed., .. great comparison between the poet and the bird.. hey i compare my self with many people and many things too... this is a nice write indeed.. thanks for this one..nice narrative indeed, , , liked it very much. with love shan

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Ted M 10 July 2009

Good flow, excellent ryhme, lovely idea. The spirit in us likes to break free, free from those shackles which are holding us back. fly robin fly. 10+++

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Eyan Desir 10 July 2009

Nice rhyming flow 10s

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Louis Rams 09 July 2009

like a free spirit in flight. excellent write. a ten

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Catrina Heart 09 July 2009

A perfect ending rhymes here like before. Fine simile you made you as a bird breaking free! What a lovely melancholic write.10+++

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Joseph Poewhit 09 July 2009

Breaking out of the eggshell

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 09 July 2009

A wonderful poem with nice rhyme and rhythm. Kudos.

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Marieta Maglas 09 July 2009

The tree is the body and the bird is the soul.Only by praying we can be free...nice idea, wonderful poem..10+++ from me

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Surya . 09 July 2009

beautifull write. rhyming is prominent. voted10 surya

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rago rago 09 July 2009

break free very melancholy write...........

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