Break Free Comments

I smiled and said, its we.....everyone else along with you....nice thought well penned

There's nothing like freedom

I like your style of writing

cheer as the poem push my heart to reach the echelon of the highest point of desire.....a wish come in a simple template and sound of the soul shout for joy...a lovely poem of today...a 10 +

freedom.......what a precious and painful word...........

very nice.. of course you made it rhyme well.

to me it sounded like the eagle-song of the CREE indian-american people very very nice i recommend u do an unrelated but beautiful piece on utube vanishing bread-instrumental i'd send u the link but PH parses the links on paste also do.....elcondor pasa...andean flute or if u can get then by... Paul Mauriat cheers

very musical indeed., .. great comparison between the poet and the bird.. hey i compare my self with many people and many things too... this is a nice write indeed.. thanks for this one..nice narrative indeed, , , liked it very much. with love shan

Good flow, excellent ryhme, lovely idea. The spirit in us likes to break free, free from those shackles which are holding us back. fly robin fly. 10+++

Nice rhyming flow 10s

like a free spirit in flight. excellent write. a ten

A perfect ending rhymes here like before. Fine simile you made you as a bird breaking free! What a lovely melancholic write.10+++

Breaking out of the eggshell

A wonderful poem with nice rhyme and rhythm. Kudos.

The tree is the body and the bird is the soul.Only by praying we can be free...nice idea, wonderful poem..10+++ from me

beautifull write. rhyming is prominent. voted10 surya

break free very melancholy write...........