Friday, March 19, 2010

Break Free Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see your eyes
they tell me of suffering untold
I see your arms stiffen
they are longing to hold
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Arti Chopra
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 02 September 2016

you have done so much with your heart and all sincerity but this is not what you deserve this is not what was meant to be break free, fly away if you want dont waste this life, break the fetters break free Beautiful poem with so deep and intense, passionate feelings. Thanks for sharing it.10 marks for it. Subhas

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Indranil Bhaduri 30 July 2013

Great poem in full depth. Thank you for gifting this.

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mohsin amin khan 09 May 2010

i see in you the depth that speaks with the smile words which are pious and emotional really a great poem i love your poetry madam

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