Friday, June 6, 2014

Break Comments

Rating: 5.0

I jump, up
into the air.
I do it again
only higher this time,
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Smoky Hoss
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Patti Masterman 05 July 2014

A different view about the Earth for sure! Loved it.

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Juan Olivarez 19 June 2014

Yes it does. But was it the going up? Or the ummph coming down? : -)

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Lawerence Mize 15 June 2014

It do indeed. Enjoyed reading this one.

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Colleen Courtney 08 June 2014

What a very imaginative write! Enjoyed the read!

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Dave Walker 08 June 2014

With all the people in the world the earth definitely needs a break. A great poem.

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Christian Hudak 06 June 2014

beautiful poem! ! ! ! wow... wow, i marvel upon the concept and structure of this piece of literature! very well done

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