Friday, July 14, 2017

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It's so stupid what I do,
Love the one who doesn't understood,
Hear those talks which is not about me,
Break my self million times to see that smile,
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Tripsha Ghosh
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Unnikrishnan E S 16 July 2017

Hi Tripsha, Very passionately worded poem. The theme of heart break is brought out with utmost clarity and emotional build up. You have been able to try and release the pent-up emotions on a failed love, a one-way traffic as we call it. Good...

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Tripsha Ghosh

Tripsha Ghosh

Noamundi, jharkhand
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