Tuesday, August 3, 2010

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I dropp my heavy footsteps into a bar.

Cool air pierces my weary bone.
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Louisa Dai
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 August 2010

I sip clearness of fruit as drug pill. Like in the presser a fresh apple, ....v. good imagination.. carefully worded poem.......10

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