! Bread Thief Comments

Poignant and touching poem

such a sad story..well narrated...........

this poem is really touching and has a great theme behind, , hunger the common language of the world should be eradicated.... God save the universe! ...

Absolutely poignant!

hunger, undoubtedly, is the largest religion on earth!

i dunno if satiating hunger can amount to theft...a typical scene we often watch in pictures!

Maybe I'm idealistic but I hope people who steal food are treated differently. Thanks for this touching poem.

: (.........its sad to know that things like that happen in reality; (very sad poem...yet very well written, nice style.

I Think you must be hopeful to God. ALL THAT IS HAPPENING IS GOOD BUT WE ARE UNABLE TO UNDERSTAND. SO HAVE A DES FAITH IN ALMIGHTY.

Vidyadhar! A poignant and very eloquent poem you have written here! ! *10*! Best regards! Friend Thad

Nice. Reminds me of flashback scenes of tamil movies of the 80's.

absolutely touching...how many of us can really appreciate this story when we live in such different worlds...great work

Serious view asking questions about ethics and morality: questions that society so often gets wrong. I empathise completely with you here. Paul.

the hunger and pain when never obeys the law of the land as when law reculses the even death..................yet of poignant feeling, wellpenned, thanks fopr sharing

I particularly liked the middle to the end portion of the poem. I thought it was very moving emotionally. I was far better than the average of what I see. This is a poem which should be read. I will be much more powerful that way. I gave it a 9. The end rhymes in the early part were not there, though the were at the end. A poem should have consistency in whatever design is chosen. GW62

This is a touching poem that melts anyone's heart.

breaks my heart to read this, breaks my heart - the distance between life and death so long, so far, the distance between hunger and death, as in this poem, so slim, so short. Let us all make the distance between life and death so far that we have to walk for a long number of years before we meet death - do I say it's a great poem, i guess i could.

It is so wrong when anyone has to die of hunger, it angers lots of people, a very worthy poem you have written here my friend, Best wishes Lynda xxx

very moving poem, its dissappointing how people wouldn't share their food for the people who need it.... very nice poem.

reminiscent of les miserable if i am not wrong. a really moving poem. when we think of millions going without food, i really get angry when anybody wastes food.