Tuesday, March 2, 2010

Bread From Hell Comments

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In the mouths of untrained ones I see bread from hell
Because their foolish tongues enjoy in its sweetness.
Its baker baked it with a flavor you can’t tell
Because its unique taste will bring you to its spell.
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Obed dela Cruz
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Brian Jani 04 July 2014

Most things that feel so good are probably wrong too.well written poem

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Pacific Hernandez 04 March 2011

A good poem written about temptation and its consequences. I will give this 10.

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Martine Kolber 12 March 2010

I truly like this one, great write!

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Obed dela Cruz

Obed dela Cruz

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