Bread Comments

A poignant verse written with clarity of thought and mind. Congrats on being selected as POD.

Definitely it's the miracle of bread, and this Bread brought me to tears.

Thanks for an insightful poem that was well-penned. : -)

Exactly five o'clock And thirty people killed Bread never had this taste before This blood this whispering texture this grand apprehension....// A spine-chilling and heart-rending reportage covering a tragic moment of mindless violence and carnage of 1975 in Beirut. Thanks.

Inscrutable day this phrase, even if it weren't repeated, resonates. and the poem as a whole, describing ordinary people and ordinary things (which i guess most of us enjoy casually) , reminds us with a stab of the ongoing tragedy of beirut and lebanon. -gk

a very sad poem of the reality some people still have to live with............ the consequences of WAR? ............well written

In the veins of clouds..... thanks for posting.....

Lazy as usual! Thanks for sharing.

In the miracle of bread. A well articulated poem. SYLVA

Wow this is the best poem ive come across today.well layed down