Saturday, October 10, 2009

Breach Of Innocence-The Road Kill Comments

Rating: 5.0

One sunny noon, while chasing butterflies you &me,
Tried to unravel the mystery of the birds &the bees,
We stopped at some broken wings, lying on the ground, splattered,
Blackish red. To divert your attention I said,
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Seema joglekar
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Dr Antony Theodore 17 June 2010

dear poetess, this is a marvellous poem............... i read it and re read it.. i enjoyed it. there is poesy, there is innocence. there is God and unanwered questions which haunt all of us. only faith and faith alone is our hold.. thank u. i like to read ur poems more and more. thaank you.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 15 October 2009

well narrated and good imgery..conversation part too done well

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Ravi Sathasivam 15 October 2009

A good imaginary poem. Beautiful and well penned. Enjoyed reading it

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Mubeen Sadhika 10 October 2009

The fantasy imageries well expressed. Beautifully narrated. deserves 10+++

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