Sunday, February 10, 2019

Brazened Truth(Composed Years Ago) Comments

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The brazened truth is like awakening of Buddha
when enlightenment came his way
Tonite it came my way
the awareness comes from within
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 20 February 2019

thanks to all for the advice

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 February 2019

sacred bamboo O; its true for good foundation even in hollow! I don't know maybe heavenly bamboo! for the primitive monastery it was decorative forestry in the depth of heart (not in the jungle of Asia) as the monotypic genus Nandina perhaps touched religious gala ............../// SACRED BAMBOO.........I think, beautiful for poetic expression

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Prabir Gayen 13 February 2019

Donot Change Bamboo image....If you become hollow like Bamboo God will sing through you.. You simply sit and song flows through you...Our Spine is also like bamboo with different psychic centres. In Japan and Tao religion Bamboo is sacred...Very essential knowledge is There...Thanks.../////

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Prabir Gayen 13 February 2019

Donot Change Bamboo image....If you become hollow like Bamboo God will sing through you.. You simply sit and song flows through you...Our Spine is also like bamboo with different psychic centres. In Japan and Tao religion Bamboo is sacred...Very essential knowledge is There...Thanks.....

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Prabir Gayen 13 February 2019

Donot Change Bamboo image....If you become hollow like Bamboo God will sing through you.. You simply sit and song flows through you...Our Spine is also like bamboo with different psychic centres. In Japan and Tao religion Bamboo is sacred...Very essential knowledge is There...Thanks

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Prabir Gayen 13 February 2019

Yes bamboo is sacred....If you become hollow and empty through meditation...like the hollow bamboo..you will be enlightened...Bamboo stands for music....emptiness... Bamboo stands for our inner body too. As Rabindranath Tagore said in Song offering No 1... This little flute of a reed thou hast carried over hills and dales, and hast breathed through it melodies eternally new.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 February 2019

thank you so muchly for ur ingenuity.... PG ji

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 February 2019

still erect as a sacred bamboo MY POETIC CRITICS HAVE ADVISED I MODIFY THESE LINES CAN ANYONE OR YOU ADVISE PLEASE ALSO... .you fall into the brazened darkness (of ignorance) * TO BE REMOVED

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Rajnish Manga 11 February 2019

'Brazenness of truth, Enlightenment of Buddha, darkness of ignorance, sun winds its way through.... darkness to light.... and I emerge as the enlightened one'. Age old wisdom makes it philosophically delightful. Thanks for the poem.

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Prabir Gayen 10 February 2019

stay far behind lest in the shadows still long enough you fall into the brazened darkness of ignorance as the sun winds its way through from darkness to light my life does also ensue and I emerge as the enlightened one still erect as a sacred bamboo... ....I told your earlier you are special One

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 February 2019

By now you know me well At my age words just come but this poem was composed many years ago 1100 poets have read it as yet across the internet thanks PG YOU brazened me

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M Asim Nehal 10 February 2019

A thoughtful poem with nice poetic expressions.

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