Silence riffles as heart dapples grey
Warmth when loses gloss as lurid sunset
And night ruefully loses eyes of light
Does world cries by adieu of sun?
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A really well thought out and beautifully crafted poem Subhendu
a poignant heart-stirring write on the flipside of life...loss of a near and dear one is inevitable...but the memories and moments spent with the beloved ones are immortal.
very well written poem, well expressed ideas, thank you for sharing.10
Your poem feels and expresses 'Brazen cup of sorrow' that's filled with a' dapple heart'/ lurid sunset'that's pours out on over the page. Great poem with such pleasing natural metaphors that gives one a feeling of calm and peace even while drinking the brazen cup of sorrow. Good Job, Dr Kar