Monday, March 15, 2010

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***brazen Cup Of Sorrow***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

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Silence riffles as heart dapples grey
Warmth when loses gloss as lurid sunset
And night ruefully loses eyes of light
Does world cries by adieu of sun?
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Dr subhendu kar
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Almedia Knight-Oliver 12 July 2010

Your poem feels and expresses 'Brazen cup of sorrow' that's filled with a' dapple heart'/ lurid sunset'that's pours out on over the page. Great poem with such pleasing natural metaphors that gives one a feeling of calm and peace even while drinking the brazen cup of sorrow. Good Job, Dr Kar

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Sandra Martyres 28 March 2010

A really well thought out and beautifully crafted poem Subhendu

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Chitra - 28 March 2010

a poignant heart-stirring write on the flipside of life...loss of a near and dear one is inevitable...but the memories and moments spent with the beloved ones are immortal.

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Marieta Maglas 25 March 2010

very well written poem, well expressed ideas, thank you for sharing.10

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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