Sunday, July 19, 2009

Bray Comments

Rating: 2.5

I kissed you as you smiled at me, your radiant face lit up the night.
My arms snaked round and went to ground within that circle of delight.
I nuzzled at your neck and smelt the wonder of your scent,
the rain fell down yet time stood still; a lifetime in a heartbeat wrent.
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Black Mendilouche
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Red Talgarth 20 July 2009

I'd have given it a 10 but for my pathological loathing of rhyming couplets.

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