Bravo Egypt! Comments

Wo0o0o0o0o0w wonderful poem as I thought :)

A search for new lights, A search for new hopes, A search for new flights, New ambitions, And of course a new world. A freedom from Suffocation and darkness. These are exceptionally noble sentiments, I also joined you in celebrating the Egyptian people, regaining their freedom and honour, throwing off the oppression of the 'Amned Daula' and the 'Moochabarat', their secret police who enforced the Emergency Laws with such cruelty in Egypt for decades. Thus fittingly the first of those poems was 'An Egyptian Freedom Falcon Flies Battle Cry Freedom'. Long may freedom fly over Egypt. Another wonderful necessary poem Mohd. Akmal Nazir my friend.

Finally the voices that echo in the air of Egypt call the rain of blessing...The Victory now flood over the smile and i like this poem as it contribute a great support for them... voice of chance and it sound freedom....So Bravo to U Bravo to Egypt- Unwritten Soul

Change, the offspring of time, that's a beautiful liner! I only hope that Egypt is soon freed from all that's happening there. A change is about to come. This poem has a rebellious tone and hopeful about future, I admire your thoughts on this.

Power of people, revolt to opression , inner strength sprouted, win of democracy, srongly worded with great meaning

'Let's pray peace Devoid of bloodshed and destruction.' Well said Mohd. Akmal Nazir All the world with a conscience and a heart are praying for this. Peace freedom the end of dictator Mubarak. The protesters must succeed because if Mubarak will not more more blood will flow as his Emergency Laws, secret police claim more lives with immunity. If he manages to cling to power even only until September, the innocent, those who publicly opposed him will pay a price in torture, this jackal does not change his spots. Time and the courage of Egyptian protesters must erase him from power swiftly so that freedom, a better tomorrow can finally bless the Egyptian people.

A sentiment all civilized people should hope for, your strong words flow through and make you think. Thank you i enjoyed reading this poem in you a true talent of the written word

should corrupt the world.' Let's pray peace Devoid of bloodshed and destruction. ///yes let peace prevail without bloodshed. let us pray. nice poem, , ,10 I wrote.. million men march, , , crisis deepens...on same series

Your last two lines are excellent....I concur heartily! I love how the first five flow, and the middle is a fascinating study. It's a nice tribute to her late turmoil.

Excellent and well penned. The state of affairs in Egypt is not the best right now, but with our collective prayers and outreach programs, the best will come to that great land! tfs 10/110

a very well suggested message and a great poem

Change is inevitable, Change, the offspring of time, wow! This is like a peace call for humanity's sake, you have successfully voiced the need of the hour for Egypt. Nice write.

An excellent poem in support of Egypt's struggle for change.

A good poem about the turmoil in Egypt. I can only hope and pray that my country, America stays out of their affairs and let them settle it. A good write. Lynn

Good poem i like the sentiments too, there are some brave people out there! it's a controversial subject but i have written one too 'the egyptian revolution'.

People all over the world seek one thing, and that is freedom. Unfortunately freedom is not free. Freedom is bought with blood, sweat, and tears. It sounds wrong but freedom must be fought for. The good people of Egypt know this and are willing to do this.The cradle of civilization above all else should be free.

this is a good poem. I think your conclusion is great, peace, devoid of blood shed. Lasting changes can be obtained by non-violent protests as so well illustrated by Ghandi and M Luther King jr. Let us Pray for the people of Egypt, that they may obtain justice and fairness without too much blood shed.

People had spoken and voices of justice seeking more than equality and liberation. Intense poem with current failure in Egypt but the poet at the stage of getting his words spoken laud and clear. New hope and new wish is totally against the aggressor and still the poet kindness can be seen in his conclusion as nothing above The Most Supreme to allow this revolution against the oppressor. Excellent and keep your voice heard! ! ! ! 10

This poem raises enthusiasm in us to move towards a better future free from oppression and bloodshed.. Egypt was in need to do such a revolution to start changing all the bad events of that dark era, , We woke up and will never stop till completing what we start INSHALLAH.. Excellent choice of words & meanings, you start the poem with a very good way show that you feel a deep need of searching for positive change.. You have clarified your ideas in a simplified meanings so it can be understandable for all.. This is really a wonderful poem.. Keep writing Mr. Akmal, , Regards, Faith..

People had spoken..... the poet made a choice and he choose liberty with breaking a veil of silent aggressor. People had spoken and he must go when the people said go. Enough is enough and i finally sense freedom in the poet's heart. Well written with solid message.