EMO's
You break free from the mold,
Your not like the rest,
You wear uniquness,
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The following two lines pretty much sum up my suspicions about Emo Kids: 'Have you focused so much on 'being unique' That you have merely forgotten to be you? ' I like the tone: sceptical, but open-minded and not aggressively critical.
they are truly brave and they let every1 know what they feel and this poem is perfect.. nicely done i should say - mel
so true. They are brave because everyone is so affraid of showing how they really feal in this society, and it's nice to see that they have broke away from it, and said look, this is who i am, take it or leave it. I'll show you my emotions, it's up to you to decide what you think about me know,