Brave New World Comments

The repitition flows like a mantra, enabling the reader to reflect on the thoughts expressed by the poet in this simple yet effective poem. Lovely Edith. j x

We dream of Utopia to have it all around But if we search, we find it inside in full No need going out groping for the nill Very good work Sir Sathya narayana

lovely sentiment Edith, it is a state of mind - and you are halfway there already - in your creative mind. Shaun