Sunday, June 7, 2009

Brave Knight Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shimmering white angel
dust and honey
flow on me
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rosalinda flores martinez
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Noel Horlanda 13 September 2009

I like every line of this piece but the ending is admirable. I'm impress dear lady. The brave knight is proud of you. Take care...

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Catrina Heart 26 July 2009

WOW! ! ! Awesome...great and powerful words with fantastic imagery...10

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Keshav Prasad 07 June 2009

nice write

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Marieta Maglas 07 June 2009

''Gleaming swords of clasping hands'' a wonderful visual metaphor.....well written...10++

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