Brave In Love (Being Inspired By Steep A Poem Of M.J. Lemon) Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Brave In Love (Being Inspired By Steep A Poem Of M.J. Lemon)

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Difficult was the way to the mountain,
As I could not climb, I joined the immortal braves,
And I dived in the restless streams of a hot fountain,
I left myself on the mercy of the violent waves,
My mother kissed my forehead and sang,
My son will be cause of another big bang.

I see in my son the glimpses of Godly love,
He is evolving simultaneously in a fish and in a bird,
A swimming dolphin as well as a flying dove,
I know he will be tortured being the third!
But he will come again to write a love story,
On the top of the mountain you'll see its glory.

(That's what I learned from the life of Holy Jesus Christ)

Brave In Love (Being Inspired By Steep A Poem Of M.J. Lemon)
Friday, May 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: jesus,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 11 May 2018

I liked this write. Well penned.+++10

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Richard Wlodarski 17 October 2024

2) Such an incredibly beautiful poem so wisely dedicated to the source of inspiration and motivation. Additionally, is the graphic your art work? Its work and message is visually stunning!

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Richard Wlodarski 17 October 2024

Esteemed Poet, I do not know how I had missed this poem back then. But in reading it now, I am even more inspired and motivated to continue with the work that needs to be done. A heart full of Thanks!

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A magnificent write full of wisdom. ''He will come again to write a love story, on the top of the mountain, you will see its glory.'' Beautiful lines of a great poem. Well executed write.10

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Mj Lemon 12 May 2018

A wonderful verse, Akhtar. So well, so perfectly, executed.

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Nudershada Cabanes 12 May 2018

A beautifully inspired poem Sir Akhtar ji. Wonderful execution.10

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