He fought with rare grit
And more so when hit,
His pyre as if lit.
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A great Haiku sir! Appreciated and admired..........................10+++++++++
'A great haiku', thanks, and an endearing feedback, dear poet.
Poets often step back and comment on happenings as a witness, the way soul does the happenings around it, without emotionally involving.
Soldiers sold for war! ! ! Wickedness of mankind on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
With apologies, dear EKL, I know you are a peace-loving soul who is against all wars, and despite this you appreciate read and appreciate it, Commendable, many thanks.
Some fight till fit, Some all belief beat, And grievously fight when hit.// yeah right you are
'Yeah right you are' as you say, but how far 'right' goes? Thanks dear MB