Brave Comments

Beautiful lines, inspirable words, melodeous.

facts of life we all age in this life's worldly stage why rage all our lives we passed away this way so for how much longer do you expect to stay to the youth now give way all our lives we pass ed this way let's now clear the lonely pathway

Yes, brave enough to hurl one's life-energy into the void, because where else does it have to go? And how else would the sphere of life expand? The one making such a gesture ends up nowhere, but traceries across the sky begin from such arcs.

Has feeling. I liked it. Keep writing.