Friday, June 22, 2007
Branwen And The Starling Comments
Rating: ★5.0
You were my shadow in the darkness
of the kneading-trough.
I taught you to speak, to love;
named you for the child I lost,
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Ivan Donn Carswell
04 July 2007
Tan, some fabulous imagery, you've recreated an archaic atmosphere in a few well chosen words. I like both style and form. Rgds, Ivan
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Stefan N
22 June 2007
Wonder full :) p.s. seems I have to have 20 chars in order to post...
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7/21/2025 9:55:28 AM # 1.0.0
i am all a' tither from these images... please submit more of your work...