Thursday, May 14, 2009

Brandenburg Jilt Comments

Rating: 4.8

If Brandenburg can go
And much else in a row
Under the bridges flow
The sickle in tow
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Shashendra Amalshan 27 May 2009

'Hose down blooms tang of cordite Some meadows given a respite Standing crops escape the blight Children at school have no fright' well thank god we have peace at last in Sri Lanka, government says it s over, aftera all, i hope it is...i the way you express yourself, the rhymes give that much needed flow to the poem..great..10+++

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