Sunday, September 1, 2013

Branded Bridal Blues Comments

Rating: 5.0

The lives of our times, these days anymore aren’t so much ours, their yours and then their kinda mine,
The riddles in our rhymes, aren’t so much sung for each other anymore, in fact, not most times
The lilt in our voices, have gone flat from too many untaken back swipes and further disrespectful choices
The grins we used to swap, are mostly drowned out by angered, juvenile and know it better than you voices.
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Heather Wilkins 26 September 2013

Marriage can become overwhelming. after while it become placid. good read

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Heather Wilkins 26 September 2013

Marriage can become overwhelming. after while it become placid. good read

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Saadat Tahir 01 September 2013

a winding painful tortured rendering prose......like with poetic intensity effectively catches ones attention liked

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Jodie Hardy 01 September 2013

This is written in a different way than what I am used to reading, I love the style. Such a sad subject, It is easy to lose yourself in marrage. x x

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