Sunday, February 25, 2007

Branded Comments

Rating: 5.0

It never occurred to me that I would see
the end of us come so suddenly:
a tornado roaring down the highway past
101 and Grand would be the final brand.
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Alicia Patti
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Chris Mendros 06 March 2007

Sounds like a great depiction of a harrowing event that just won't go away, won't leave you in peace. 'Scotomata', i love it!

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David Harris 26 February 2007

Alicia, this is a sad little poem that you have written here. The imagery stands out well as it normally does. I liked it very much. You drew me into this one. I could picture it as I read. Great poem. David

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Alicia Patti

Alicia Patti

Boston, MA
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