Wednesday, June 18, 2014

Branded Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her little black dress is by Ralph Lauren,
her complexion is Lancôme.
Estee lauder blushed her lips
And Apple made her phone.
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John F. McCullagh
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Christian Hudak 19 June 2014

Wow, beautiful poem! Short, but the farthest thing from simple! Truly great (: I invite you to check out some of my own, and leave any advise for me as a writer, I would greatly appreciate it! Sincerely - Christian Hudak

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Sandra Feldman 18 June 2014

Ingenious, very well written and amusing to read, What more does the reader need?

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Sandra Feldman 18 June 2014

Ingenious, very well written and amusing to read, What more does the reader need?

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* Sunprincess * 18 June 2014

..........this luxurious poem deserves a gold medal.....truly enjoyed reading every line... ..................................~~~~~~~ love love love ~~~~~~~...............................

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Colleen Courtney 18 June 2014

Ha! I absolutely love this poem! How original and masterfully creative! A definite save to my favorites list! Well done!

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