Brand New Day Comments
Introduction: Some days you feel alive, some days you don't...it's the elegance of life which many face in the days of existence. Through our own fray whatever it may be, we look out for a brand new way towards the light. We wander, more or less as a rabbit looking for its new home; crawling in and out within this baffled world to find serenity - To find a brand new day filled with everlasting aurora of peace and contentment.
Sometimes the sky is blue, sometimes it looks so white
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This poem echoes vividly the concept of everything existing as opposite pairs in the universe: day&night, positive&negat, male and female, even happiness and sadness. Waking up to a brand new day everyday, we are vulnerabale to one part of this opposite throughout our deeds... Aqeeb is reliable... for sensible poems.
Beautiful write Aqeb..Sometimes we need to wait before we fully understand what we have faced in past and sometimes we only fall but many times we need to gain from all of this pain..because like you said, tomorrow we have a brand new day..and it continues everyday_Unwritten Soul
every word you said are true. I felt this poem flow through my vein.
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7/29/2025 6:41:15 AM # 1.0.0
Concept good. Rhythm good. Focal points good. You got this one on the money. The structure of how this was wrote kept me drawn in the most.