Sunday, February 21, 2021

Brand New Beginnings Comments

Rating: 5.0

They finally put a colony of people on Mars.
And Jon was one of the lucky ones to be first.
He was already thinking of ways to rob, steal, and kill.
All of the things that he had done on earth.
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Lamar Cole
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Varsha M 21 February 2021

Deep inbuilt world never goes out. It stays we need we understand. It's the art of humans who can bring good above sll these evils also. Beautifully penned in mars world.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 21 February 2021

Thats deep and so true.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 February 2021

So true, Lamar! A piece of crap will be a piece of crap, no matter where you put him! Very well worded and so impressingly you start with Mars, I thought the USA only gets the red dust first, but even so I have enjoyed this brilliant poem.5 Stars!

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