Brand New Comments

Sometimes a painful patch disturbs us mentally but at last it's removed..................10

A great write. You've captured the very essence of what love ought to mean.

A lovely write with a great message Encouraging me to stand up and fight to win,10

Very nice elaboration about how a good soul can rehabilitate a disturbed and unorganized life to a normal and peaceful one. Kudos to that boy friend and his good soul.

My heart sang a new tune in key.A beautiful line Hazel well written Really enjoyable read

You made me feel so alive and brand new...Wonderful write, Hazel....Filled positivity in me after reading it. Lovely poem.

They say sentimentality makes bad poetry, but there are some lovely images here that make beautiful music. When was this anyway?

You have an amazing style of writing.. loved it

Written straight from the start like the change has taken place. It must've been a sure change.

I really love this poem! ! Nice dance of words and utmost love expressed in this poem. You must care about who this describes very very much. What A Beautifal poem!

Poignant and rich in a tapestry of emotive words...excellent..

Life will always offer you reason to be happy. Will written and nicely developed. I liked you reception of your brand new life. Good write

beautiful work........great imagery again....................make sthe reader flow with your poem lovely :)

So sad that such feelings don't last. Have you read mine - Death of Innocence - Adeline

Makes you feel how special life is! Brilliant hazel! Keep coming! !

Beautiful Write Hazel... Just Beautiful! ! ! ; -) -Kelly.

Such a heartfelt effort, with happy thoughts. Read mine - Love's Diamond - Adeline

very detailed and makes the reader feel such textures, emotions, and sensations... love it.

The gift you gave me then was precious, You made me feel so alive and brand new , . light of love redounds to joy heart seems to rise being enamoured heartfelt write,10++, thanks for sharing

An old thought but in new bottle! Loved this job!