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Pitched to and fro, yes knocked about
Sorrow sucks Life out
Releasing pain, a time to cry
River of tears run to a desert dry
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born again on perfect blue...poem expressive, suggestive and indicative...well done, Linda 10
THAT WAS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN AND REALISTIC TO THE CORE... GREAT ATTEMPT TO TRANSCEND THE BOUNDARIES OF THE OLD AND TATTERED AND DISCOVER SOMETHING NEW...
Fine! As verses travelled within the reality. chosen words are beautiful....10++++
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7/31/2025 6:34:52 AM # 1.0.0
A real transcended thought captured in your poem. keep sharing. its already in my fav list.10***