Wednesday, May 28, 2008

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God send me on the earth, an innocent being,
Untouched by the black and white doing,
But the world branded me as a Brahmin,
And a curse fallen on this urchin,
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Dr. Yogesh Sharma
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C. P. Sharma 16 March 2010

True, All is politics a scoundrel's game, It brought polity a nasty name. Life and property it can't protect, How equality and prosperity effect. Let them their primary duty attend, For the rest there is 'invisible hand'. CP

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Kesav Easwaran 28 December 2009

a truth no doubt...but truths that taste bitter to some may taste sweet to some others...but as you eloquently notice in your write a truth always remains a truth alone... nice composition...10

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Chetna Tyagi 28 May 2009

i m totally in agreement wid ur thought....

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Surya . 14 May 2009

nice thoughts.but think of those who suffered for generations.nice poem.voted 10 surya

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Philippa Lane 26 April 2009

I love the passion you put into your work. Obviously, you are extremely patriotic but I sense the sadness in this poem. You are certainly a realist - expressing your own depth of sadness that you are still a divided nation...

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Subroto Chatterjee 23 April 2009

Yes, That's the nail on the head, so as to speak. We're still a divided nation. Very sad. Cheers. Subroto

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very true write sir...read my poem 'manu's varna'

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