Monday, July 8, 2013

Branches In Time Comments

Rating: 3.9

A young tender
branch
is easily bent
into submission.
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Heather Burns
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Ellen Ni Bheachain 02 May 2020

Strong woman writings of nature.

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Vishal Sharma 09 July 2013

truely inspirational and magical poem.The way short words are written, i am bowing my heads before you.may i too write like you!

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R.j. Wynn 09 July 2013

Wow, you truly write from inspirational beginnings, seems like you know where you are going.

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Wahab Abdul 08 July 2013

wonderful poetry, you know how to write poetry with excellent metaphor, this is one of my favorites...10

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 08 July 2013

The branch will also be able to carry the weight of the fruits. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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David Wood 08 July 2013

Life's journey from childhood to adulthood is always difficult, but we do blossom in the end.

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Tribhawan Kaul 08 July 2013

An oblique write about life so elegantly written. Happy writing

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David Wood 08 July 2013

This is a well written lesson about life. Good imagery too.

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Dave Walker 08 July 2013

A life lesson for us all. A great poem.

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Walterrean Salley 08 July 2013

Good comparison. Clear message. Finely penned. Enjoyed.

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