Thursday, October 9, 2008

Brainwashed Comments

Rating: 5.0

I pledge allegiance to my abuser, with incredible terror he reigns.
Holding me captive by hearts emotions, not responsible for my pain.

Beat me, cheat me, utterly defeat me, I will worship at your feet.
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Vonda Overlie
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Adeline Foster 06 September 2012

You said it well. Now throw away the hate so it will not be a part of you. Then, write poems about other subjects: trees, the wind, a kitten, anything but love. Read mine - Night Shift - Adeline

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Liebling Jacobsen 10 October 2008

beautiful poem, the words flow together ellequintly. just wanting to know if everything is ok? Your a wonderfull full of life person and i hope to work with you soon again.

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Straight 2 The Point 09 October 2008

I love your poem. I wrote a poem on brainwashing as well although it is not on this site...anyhow, nice write.

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