Tuesday, August 12, 2008

Brain Storm Comments

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I'm sitting thinking what to do,
My eyes hardly open I can prove it too.
Brain storming
There is a storm in my head that won't die down.
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Linda Brooks
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Ben Gieske 30 October 2008

Some poets think that poetry should be all about what we feel. Your poem takes that path. Maybe, in deciding in this kind of situation you should just follow your feelings or maybe start writing them down and sorting them out after you are finished. I’m sure you would end up with a poem or more just like you did with this.

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Joseph Poewhit 12 August 2008

Reminds me of BARN STORMING in an old by-plane.

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