Monday, June 1, 2009

Brain Power Comments

Rating: 5.0

Thoughts like billions of stars converse
Enclosed within the brains universe
Electrical pulses control invisibly
Moving limbs perceptibility
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Gordon D Wilkinson
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Roseann Shawiak 17 February 2014

Loved this poem, always fascinated by the way poets describe the essence and power of the brain as related to writing specifically, and just how it thinks, controls, and calculates not just numbers but words and pictures. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. RoseAnn

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Christine Kerr 12 June 2009

The left hemisphere of the brain working agains the right side, There's a lot of good information in your poem. Well done 10++

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Shashendra Amalshan 01 June 2009

Hello Gorden... hey this is an interesting one as always....yeah i get electric shocks every day.....in fact this one has a great depth too... man has become robots..you know doing chores...food is the battery...water is the fuel....nice one have fun cheers shan

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Gordon D Wilkinson

Gordon D Wilkinson

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