Saturday, May 16, 2009

Brain Plus Heart Comments

Rating: 4.9

Wonder this brain human
Lasting ever to only reasoning
And never malleable to feelings..
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Indira Renganathan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 March 2022

An excellent poem dear madam..top score.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 July 2021

A brilliant poem dear madam! Top score! !

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Chinedu Dike 09 July 2021

A beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. A concise and creative composition...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 June 2021

An insightful write. Thanks for sharing this gem dear madam, five stars.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 April 2021

Wonderful thoughts from a brilliant woman. Very perceptive write. To my Poem List

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Kannan G 27 March 2010

'A hearty brain, a brainy heart'....oh, what a wonderful write! Yes, to strike the right balance, a very tough thing indeed; but therein lies the secret of equanimity. My best wishes and warm regards to you.

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 26 September 2009

It's true brain & heart should go together, but not mixed up with other line otherwise everything become too emotional or theoritical. tks for share

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Ejaz Khan 04 September 2009

An insightful write with a message, yes there exists a need for balance between these two centres, only and only then we can function beautifully!

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Duh Huh 01 August 2009

This poem shows how imagination and talent can evoke and provoke deep thought. Thank you for sharing with us :)

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Vidi Writes 22 June 2009

This is the wonder creation of that 'Artist' Heart and Brain, two powerful balancing factors. Unless the rythm of both mingle Life will always have bad tones. In stead buiding bunglows and temples Build a balance inside the body Rest all can fall in line. Harmony of heart and mind Can create a great Symphony Wonderful, dear poet. Its a super theme of the day for me. Thank you for this great read.

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excellent mam...the thinking should be from the heart...i have written one similar 'a communication gap'..i take this into my favs

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Catrina Heart 24 May 2009

Atypical application of human to reality. Most common, people go in extreme or both ends either mind or heart only...Brainy heart or hearty brain thinks in every step of the way...........

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Kesav Easwaran 22 May 2009

The processor and the pump...one stores only memories; no feelings...the other doesn't expel memories; but only feeings...good allegorical write with truth inside...10

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rago rago 16 May 2009

a beautiful write.........a hearty brain and a brainy heart......dislocation will not do the requisite........ we have to maketh our mind and brain to get in.......

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