Friday, June 29, 2012

Brain Needs Sleep Comments

Rating: 4.0

to set my brain to work i need,
to write the poems i feel.

put the feeling from brain through,
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Sharron Stephenson
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Saadat Tahir 01 July 2012

a nice fun poem...almost languid and presleep like....but it conveys an important and valid point! liked it nice write :)

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Robert Wilson 30 June 2012

please allow you brain to sleep, as we need more of your poems. and if you are too tried you cannot write.this poem is like all the rest sweet and good write.

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