Tuesday, July 17, 2012

Brain & Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've always had this war
I've always lost hope 
when it comes to brain and heart
I lose my blood and I get high
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Chinedu Dike 18 June 2018

Well conceived and nicely brought forth with insight. Thanks for sharing Sara.

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Captain Cur 17 July 2012

A poem with its head held high, but why must the heart die?

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An emotional quandary filled with angst, fear and yet intrepidness....And very well expressed! Hope this is not an auto-bio write, but if so...stay with the fight...your words tell me that youcan & will win in the end, so long as you temper, balance and allow time itself to do some of its own healing....~FjR~

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