Tuesday, April 19, 2016

Brain Damage Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love went out like satin night
unnoticed in narcotic dreams.
Love left me doped like a black star,
like a pillow made of stone.
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Barry Middleton
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Norah Tunney 19 April 2016

This poem has a heart stirring sadness to it and laced with the softness of a tender breathless embrace beautiful! ! Also love the imagary in the first 4 lines Thank you Barry

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Barry Middleton 20 April 2016

Thank you Norah, I am delighted by your comment.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 April 2016

Like a black star! ! Love and pain. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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