Wednesday, February 4, 2009

Brain Comments

Rating: 4.5

Yesterday I lost my mind
It must've flew away
Although I searched, I couldn't find
Any trace of it today-
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Leslie Ching
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alex waters 24 February 2009

This is a very excellent write leslie. when you can't think of anything to write about, write about it. a most clever way to approach it. i give you a ten and a tipped hat

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Barry A. Lanier 22 February 2009

Very creative and pulling together a thought with an actual event that most of can relate to....I could see the pickled specimen in the jar and smell the formaldehyde or embalming fluid, , , , , ,

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Leslie Ching

Leslie Ching

Toronto, ON, Canada
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