Lord giveth the brain
To be sane
Which we all
Have profaned.
Made amongst us
Few insane
Mirrored reflection
For the sane.
But this brain
Of the sane
Has become
A source of bane.
Boon!
For him
Who
Lacks the brain.
No I, No my
No boundaries
To restrict
The flight.
Oh brain
Why
Thou has
This animal tamed.
By misusing the brain, we make it a bane, though God deposited it in us as a boon. A splendid write! !
What a beautiful message conveyed! Now-a-days human beings behave no less than animals n we r one of them. We have forgotten what is the actual purpose of the things gifted to us by God. We misuse them, and that is the reason for our insanity. Once you've don't value what u have, u lose it, u lose the essence, u lose the preciousness. Hats off. Awesome write.
Human being is the weakest creatures in nature but God has gifted a magnificent thing that is brain. but it is pity less human being can utilise it properly. xlent write.
I enjoy the whole poem.overall message is really fantastic.the last stanza makes me out of words.Well done! ! ! ! my vote is 8.
bliss is for those who are insane................indeed so true
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The misuse of brain is a historic eventuality prompted by the so called progress based on materialism. God who remained idle for 4 billion years without giving sense to the dinosaurs and the other living beings of remote past blundered just 6000 years ago... We are help[ess