Friday, July 25, 2008

Bra-Less Comments

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Lana when she had to wear
her stuffy, scratchy, underwear,
fell for the ploy and put it on;
was paid quite well by Mr. Jon.
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Linda Hepner
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James B. Earley 27 March 2009

An interesting joint effort expressed here. At poem's end, you explain....elegantly...when...and how the bra should be removed.....while the good Doctor speaks only....to the intricate details of putting them on.

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Andrew Lockley 25 July 2008

thats a good poem it read well and rhyming too - nice =p

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Jurietta Duraan 25 July 2008

Very good and comical.... I made my daughter read it because she is at the stage of the first verse! Well done,

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