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wow, nice, just ur not suppose to take out lyrics of a song, unless u get the permission from the singer. But it is really touching, and good.

nice tanvi, , at first i thought that it was marria carey bye song and then i keeped reading i was like oh thats not it good job

not an easy subject but beautifully taken on by tanvi

Tanvi: Very good, it expresses the sorrow of all of us for those who lose their lives in disasters around the world. So many are mourning their loved ones. Adeline

The mood of the poem is very strong… since it talks about the mourns and the sorrows of those who has been affected with this certain scenarios of life.

Beautiful, and relateable. It was an overall good read, however I do believe that in line 15, you accidently put a c in silently.

great poem...bravely written with strong feeling about the tragic incident..nicely narrated..

terrorist hve brave hearts to destroy and kill people, while heroes hve also their hearts to defend and do good things in their country..whom do u think owned the weak hearts, ill tell u, , , not the heroes... UR POEM S NICE, I CAN RELATE ON THAT COZ ITS REALLY HAPPENING..everyone are sacrificing just to survive..

touching and beautiful...i can feel the patriotism and the agony inside...i share your feels, Tanvi...good presentation in rich rhyming scheme...10

your poem is great! !

wouldn't it be great if we could just say, right, this has to stop. and they'd listen. thatnks for sharing, this is great x

yeah this is the sad thing of any type of battles......you have described the pains very well dear..thanks 10of ten

yu penned the tragic incdnt n a great way...its really sad, some still didn understand killin othrs sure wont make their dreams come true...wll pray togethr so tht it never happns again not only n india...it should be stoped allovr cos we all one and the same.... ..thanks for sharing

a beautiful poem on a very sad and traumatic event. Great write, these soldiers will be in our hearts forever and in our prayers

I join you in your prayer and salutation to those bravehearts who lost their lives in Mumbai.

compassionate write, a good tribute to those who die so we can live. Mamta

A brave write, good work on a topic we all wish we didn't have to feel compelled to write about in a peaceful world, Lynda xx

a courage write..well expressed inner feeling against terrorist attacks..good piece. Ency Bearis

cool. nice use of mariah carey lyrics at the beginning! she has such a good voice... anyway. yeah good poem. powerful words! bye brittany

this poem was so heart moving and it made realize something that was locked away for a long time. you showed true emotion in this poem and it was well written and brilliant. Thank you for this experience from your poem and god bless the brave hearts that fought in that war 10/10