Boys Boys Comments

While this piece of literature is certainly compelling, and I'm excited that you choose to write in your free time, there are a number of grammatical errors that hinder its effectiveness. Your use of 'There, ' 'Their, ' and 'They're, ' are completely incorrect. Their: 'They consumed their brownies' (Posessive) There: 'They went to a small bakery over there.' (Directional) They're: 'They're my fog.' (Contraction 'They are') I hope you'll find this helpful. If not, we'll have to seriously reconsider your grade in my class. -Mr. Boly

babe why do we put so much time and energy in to these boy? haha. you know that they are a wast of time! ! hahaha! but really nice job the haze and maze very complimentery! ~SS CHANTILIE<3