Friday, August 3, 2012

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Rating: 4.7

Every morning, his face, the only sight I wish to see.
Better hurry now, can't let her get away from me
It's like he's pulling me and I got to obey
She's mine today, no more running away
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Renee Maritz
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Dr Antony Theodore 11 March 2017

Calm morning blue eyes, his looks, her smile, gaze, trance, love. love is mysterious. is nt it? a very fine poem dear poetess. tony

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Sylvaonyema Uba 12 December 2016

A nice piece of poem. I invite you to comment on my poems too.

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Fisando Maritz 06 August 2012

Dit is 'n Pragtige gedig :) Hou so aan!

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Michael Round 03 August 2012

I rate this an 8 which is my top mark so far. This is a very good piece. Well done. Do more.

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