Tuesday, October 7, 2008

Boy With His Head Down Comments

Rating: 5.0

Miles had his head down on his desk.
He was the meanest brute
His head’s down on his desk so much
It began taking root.
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Brie Carter
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Karen Hernandez 29 January 2010

hey i like this poem its funny but also has a meaning and its good

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~EmmaLeigh~ Smith 29 May 2009

you have a way with words.

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Very unique...good work-DLG

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Carol Gall 15 May 2009

lol wonderful Brie great sense of humor

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Donall Dempsey 07 October 2008

Hee hee Brie...ya can hold your head up with this poem...playfully surreal and a delightfully delicious twist. And Miles to go before he sleeps and miles to go...before he sleeps.20 different uses for a mean brute...it kinda...grows on you! love Dónall Dónall

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