Boy's Day Out Comments

A beautifully written poem. So sad.........and it happens too often. I have no tolerance for drunk driving! My parents did so much of it when we were little (with us in the car) that I still have nightmares! This poem is so heart wrenching. Great job. Sincerely, Mary

Hard hitting, but great feel about your writing. Tragic topic handled well. Thank you for sharing. Kindest Regards Slim. x.

This is very sad poem, it reads beautifully though, well done Moyax

Shannon, you did a wonderful job with such a tragic subject. You held me from the first line on. How very sad. Warmest regards and respect, CJ

A very moving poem Shannon, a very real story too, which hits hard. Nice poem, I enjoyed it. Love Ernestine XXX