Thursday, April 5, 2012

Boy On A Bridge Comments

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All my life I have known
The shape of a track through sand and rock and stone
to the edge of pools where dark shadows
fill the water's face with reflected sky and willows
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Josephine Collett
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 31 May 2012

I like the vivid images painted in this poem, and the view from the bridge as narrated by the main character. It speaks of hope and wonder, and a greater dream to reach beyond.

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 05 April 2012

Very nice....i luv it...the imagery and concord inherent therein is very great....kudos and keep it up.

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Josephine Collett

Josephine Collett

Hull Yorkshire England
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