Sunday, May 1, 2016

Boy And A Girl Dialogue Comments

Rating: 5.0

Girl:
Do you love me
With a love fair and free
Unconditional and true as it could be?
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Olorundare Tiwatope
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Ivan Brooks 31 May 2017

You might have been long deceived And love might have cause you grieve Here I come, for a sweet relief....Here the poet was able to show his brilliance as the boy takes command of his destiny.The acknowledgement, assurance and the promise of a better life he has to offer her made this a beautiful piece of romantic poetry.......keep writing dude, you have!

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 May 2016

It's easier said than done! Nice piece of work.

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Olorundare Tiwatope 01 May 2016

Thanks for your wonderful comment, Dr.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 May 2016

Many may come To build for you an elusive home But I come to make you live Where your heart will never roam.A beautiful poem in the conversation form between the lover and the lady love. promises, desires, wishes, care. planning for the future, togetherness. love..... thank you for all these dear poet. tony

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